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Bob Crane
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I have always been an advocate of Aristotle's "Art of Brevity", however both are fine.  Inserting "presently" may be to hint that he is leaving soon.

Feb 01, 2022 10:37 PM
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Wayne Martin
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Keep it short and sweet by skipping "presently"!

Feb 02, 2022 03:59 AM
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I was taught by the best. SHORT sentences with the FEWEST words possible make a more powerful point than vomiting out War and Peace.

John Doe is in office. PERIOD.

 

Feb 02, 2022 03:23 AM
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Fred,

I would say, he is in office!  I like to keep it short and succinct. A

Feb 01, 2022 08:04 PM
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Hello Fred - Grammar has long been disappointed with my skills to communicate effectively.  

Feb 02, 2022 05:14 AM
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Kat Palmiotti
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"John is presently in his office, but will be leaving in 5 minutes for the lake" might make sense. But if John is going to be there all day, then it seems to me that "John is in his office" is sufficient.

But Marte Cliff will know for sure!

Feb 02, 2022 04:53 AM
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Thomas J. Nelson, REALTOR ® e-Pro CRS RCS-D Vets
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I agree with Ron and Alexandra Seigel as a Toastmaster, we despise extra - unneeded words.  Like when people say, "I just want to say..."

No! Just say it. No lead in needed. 😅

Feb 01, 2022 08:29 PM
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Oh please, it reminds me of an old attorney friend of mine who liked to impress people with his language skills.  And this was when he was just out of law school.  We gave him enough 'grief' (humor) he stopped.  Just get to the point.  We love you and you're enough.

Feb 01, 2022 08:27 PM
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Lyn Sims
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Say it directly with less words. 

Feb 02, 2022 06:08 AM
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To me presently is a transitory statement that indicates a particular point in time and that another point may be different.  If John made widgets from 8-5 and you called at 9, I'd say "John is in the office" as he's not likely to leave for another 8 hours.  If you wanted to drive in to see him, you could take your time.

If John is a traveling salesman who is only in the office a few minutes a day, I'd use presently to indicate that he may not be there for long.  If you drove in to see him, you may miss him.  If you call his desk, he may or may not be there.

 

I am presently on Active Rain.  As soon as I hit post and close this window, I will no longer be on Active Rain.

Feb 02, 2022 09:14 AM
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Doug Dawes
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English composition and rules were never my forte. 

Feb 02, 2022 08:04 AM
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When I was a kid in 1st grade or so, the teacher noticed when I wrote that I was combining writing with block lettering. She expressed it was unusual but left me on a positive note. Today, I have learned to pursue "meaning" behind words. Granted, in certain circles, Emily Post would frown away....

Feb 02, 2022 07:34 AM
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Say the most with the fewest amount of words.

Feb 02, 2022 07:21 AM
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Joan Cox
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I would rather say --- who goes to an office now?    LOL   Marte Cliff  would know exactly what to say.

Feb 02, 2022 07:04 AM
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Kris Collis, Associate Broker
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Marte Cliff will have your grammatically correct answer :))

Feb 01, 2022 09:03 PM
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John Juarez
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I have nothing to add....presently.

Feb 02, 2022 09:51 AM
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Ray Henson
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If I am writing instructions, I would keep it short.  If I am writing a story, I may use the longer form depending on how I want to present the character.  Either way would be fine for me. 

My English teacher that was so creative with her red correction pen may disagree with me completely.  I would hate for you to see what she routinely did to my papers.  🙃

Feb 02, 2022 09:02 AM
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Carla Freund
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"Presently" is a bit formal. I think you would get a few eyebrow raises if you say it that way. 

Feb 02, 2022 08:49 AM
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Kathleen Daniels, Probate & Trust Specialist
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There is always more to the story. Some will ramble on and on and on and others say so little we don't know what the story is. 

I prefer - just get to the point. Tell me what you want to tell me. Answer my question in a clear and concise manner with no need for 57 follow-up questions before I get my answer. 

I know this may sound shocking Fred Griffin Florida Real Estate - some people are intentionally deceptive.  Some people flat-out lie! 

What question was asked that requires a response about John Doe being at his office?

Feb 02, 2022 08:38 AM
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John Doe is at the office. That's my answer and I'm sticking to it!

Feb 02, 2022 07:22 AM
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Diana Dahlberg
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I like it when people get to the point. Just say it. 

Feb 02, 2022 10:47 AM
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Olga Simoncelli
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Why not go with "John Doe is presently occupying his office and is sitting at his desk", lol? I do believe "John Doe is in his office",  conveys the idea in a more succinct way. 

Feb 02, 2022 12:26 PM
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Carol Williams
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I'm no grammar expert but if you're saying "John Doe is at his office" aren't you insinuating that it is presently... not past or future? 

Feb 02, 2022 11:01 AM
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Nina Hollander, Broker
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I would keep it short, sweet, direct. John Doe is at his office says what one needs to know. Presently is more of a British term. Most Americans would say currently. This is actually more of a stylistic question than a grammatical question.

Feb 02, 2022 12:32 PM
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Debe Maxwell, CRS
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I have said "She is presently at the office" - not sure how much longer she would be there.

 

Is does imply now (the present) but, I would think not to something that is mobile - like John Doe! 

Feb 02, 2022 01:23 PM
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Tony Lewis
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Communication is meant to be understood by those listening so grammar isn't important in a general conversation.

Feb 02, 2022 01:41 PM
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Michael J. Perry
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Would presently be hinting - not much longer ?

Feb 03, 2022 05:14 AM
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Derrick Guevremont
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I think “presently” has a place if there’s context. If a person was calling his office, maybe asking about dropping something off for John Doe, an office assistant may say he is presently in the office along with “if you’d like to speak to him now,” or “if you are nearby.”

Feb 03, 2022 02:52 AM